This is a re-write of a tale I started in 2016, and re-wrote it in 2021, breaking into 11 Chapters. It was generally well evaluated, with ratings between 7.5 and 8.00.
I re-read it recently and discovered flaws in the story: occasional lack of consistency and missing small parts (breaking into separate chapters was a bad idea), and small grammatical errors. Sometimes I had to stop and try to remember how the story developed. So, once more I re-wrote, re-edited, re-checked, and in general, improved the readability of the story. I also joined the chapters back into one long narrative.
It shows a tale about love, of personal relationships getting close and some fading away, of business challenges and successes, and of people deeply in love. It has sex (after all, this is a site for erotic stories), but the sex is only a basic ingredient of a much richer story, of people falling deeper and deeper in love. It might be too sugary for some, but I like love stories with a happy endings.
I hope that you enjoy reading it as I enjoyed writing it. Read the first chapters, and if you enjoy them, finish the tale and give me feedback. If you don’t like it, let me know and I promise to reflect on your commentaries.