30,000 downloads, 28 chapters published, Over 140,00 words with 1 chapter left to the exciting conclusion of an epic tale.
https://storiesonline.net/s/30445/daddy-i-was-naughty
The average score is 6.96. I wrote this over the course of a few months of my life. It's based on an idea that Mike McGifford told me once.
The main character's daughter works at Hooters, she is flighty, cute, and comes to her daddy for some money to solve her problems. He and his wife bought her a car, but she hasn't moved out. If you are a parent with grown kids or know some, You probably know the scenario.
Funny thing about Heather, is that she likes to be punished. She really enjoys it, and that's the twist. When she gets punished she straightens up and flies right. Lots of twists and turns in this story.
I know there is not enough time in the day to offer feedback to every author, and sometimes all you want to say is "Keep it up".
I wanted to observe though that as author I do really enjoy it when people take the time to write to me about my story, offer suggestions, maybe a grammatical fix that I missed, or in general feedback.
I have written and concluded the story, so it's just in editing at this stage. It's still nice to hear how you would have taken it differently, or questions about the path they are on.
I had considered extending this story well after what I considered to be the 'set up' phase. What I was really going for is a recurring theme in many of my stories.
A kinky situation/scenario where the participants dynamically develop a power exchange relationship and identify their needs/what they want to get out of it, and the limits and boundaries.
A good 80% of my recent stories in the past year probably touch upon that in different ways. (That statistic brought to you by "Numbers I just pulled out of my ass TM" by the way.
Once that foundation is set up, I tend to lose interest in the characters and let them ride off into the sunset to live their new and exciting changed life. Cum Dumpster: Mom has an OnlyFans was a great example of that.
https://storiesonline.net/s/25723/cum-dumpster
I loved the characters. There is literally no reason not to continue writing about their continued amoral, kinky adventures with her son managing her onlyfans site other than "I think I would just start telling you the same things about every day"
I stopped getting feedback about it as well. In fact, I rarely have people look at my back catalog. I was fortunate that DareDevil Mom placed in the clitorides, so that a few people who missed it may go back and experience what I thought was a really neat take on submission.
I just wanted to pontificate for a moment, that I believe in the absence of feedback, the author is left to conclude "people are reading this, but it is such schlocky drek that they aren't passionate enough to comment on it" or they are think "people are reading this, but it's just average and they think I should continue"
I think most of us do thrive on positive reinforcement when it's earned, and constructive feedback to help us grow.
Even some of my favorite prolific authors who I think have it all worked out like Vulgus, probably have days where they are like "Did nobody even read this?"
I would encourage you to give this story a read if you haven't. I'll conclude it tomorrow. There probably won't be a sequel but I think you will enjoy reading these characters like I did writing about them.