I hadn't looked at Mrs Henderson's Limp for two years. The story dates from the very early days of my journey in writing.
I recently received some exceptional feedback on this story - and I took another look at it. Whilst the story itself was fine, the telling of it less than that. Accordingly, I've revised it extensively, sorting out some minor story elements and dealing with poor expression and wording.
It's still the same story - but I hope it is now a much better telling of that story.
Your feedback on this would be most welcome.