Hi All
The last story I posted was called "The Tale Of Sheriff O'Dell" and I was pleased with it. Then my good friends, you know the ones who follow me and catch every mistake I make and then lovingly let me know that I suck, contacted me and told me, and I quote, "Hey Mick! You Suck!"
Actually a few very good fans caught a few things that didn't fit. Things like locations and correct tribes of Native Americans for the location of the story. I cross checked their advice and son of a gun my friends had come through again.
In the process of making the changes to the story that brought its level of reality way up, I also caught a few other errors and holes in the story. I have corrected them and added some background to make the story whole.
Thanks to those who set me right and made the story a hell of a lot better read. The corrected 2 chapter story should post late tonight or in the morning.
Mick