Interesting, this is a mixed reaction. The score is down but the downloads continue to rise like my morning wood. I'm not sure why the scoring is going down. I do plan to continue this story and only posted it as complete until I start the next block. I hope y'all enjoyed it. I've had a few nice comments and as always criticism is always welcomed.
As we speak I'm working on the next block, when I've written ten I'll post 'em! Thanks for sticking with me.