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Keeping the womenfolk in line - bible story - NEW chapter

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I began an experiment to write a few short stories. The last time I tried to write a 'short story' I was working with Mike McGifford on a story called "Best Mom Ever" about women who were in a sort of competition of the most debauched slutty mom.

I fell in love with the characters I was writing and ended up writing "Keeping the Entire Family in Line" with over 50 chapters and then a second prequel story about the husband.

Yesterday, I wrote a short story about a female led relationship. It was just a slice of life from a boy growing up in a household dominated by women. No plot other than "Typical day"

Today, I decided to revisit characters from the story "Keeping the women folk in line bible story"

https://storiesonline.net/s/24439/keeping-the-womenfolk-by-eddie

It's been a year, and now they've settled in. I enjoyed it, but decided to just add it as an epilogue chapter to the story. If you haven't read it - it's about a very busty mom who is part of the Adamite (a very real) faith that does not believe in monogomy, doesn't value virginity, and thinks that nudity is a virtue.

It didn't really feel like a "Day in the life" story and so I decided it belonged at the end of that one instead. If you enjoyed that story, here is a chance to revisit it and catch up with "Oscar Buloni" the main character. (Yes, he gets teased about his name, and no his middle name is not Meyer).

Since I had done a Femdom story, I thought it may be fun to write a maledom family. One thing I enjoyed about Oscar's family is that it works for them and the girls firmly believe in what they are doing.

I may have to try adding a chapter to some of my other stories. One reader suggested I revisit "Do you have a big dick, why not?"

The little sister and brother were very much background characters in that story, but now they could be teenagers growing up in that family.

I could also look back at HOA and write about Lindsay and her comeuppance. That was a blast to write. One of my favorite stories.

However, I was also hoping to tell new stories.

A few of them on my radar include:

Day in the Life -Hyderabad. I want to try my hand again at a Hindi erotic fiction. This would be about a boy growing up in a crowded flat in a big city in India. I want to capture the smell of Basmati rice, cardomon, and other Indian spices, and the sounds of Indian music. It would be a short story that covers his typical day. His mother is a prostitute and she often walks around with just a frock around her waist. No big plot - just a slice of life on his day to live vicariously through his eyes.

I've also considered doing a British family of Nudist from Kensington on Holiday in Cornwall. No bondage, but they are very incestuous. There used to be this author on Asstr who captured the voice of a chatty-kathy British 'mum' so perfectly. Calling after her kids 'you cheeky monkeys!!"

I'd like to write that.

Another I've considered doing is a woman in her 50s, still good looking, that is routinely sent to the neighbors house to be 'trained' as a pony and how she goes through intake and care while she is there. I'd probably have her go with her daughter in law, to share the experience. "The men are out golfing while we are galloping around this pony track...which would you rather be doing, Barbara?"

Those are just a few of the ideas percolating in my head.

 

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