Yesterday was a real crazy day for Chapter 9 of Cunt Next Door. I will say that I am pleasantly surprised that so many people took the time to let me know that I fucked up with that chapter.
That wasn't my intention by any means, but what I think it also says is that Cunt Next Door is a really special story. I fuck up all the time and people almost never bother to let me know. This time I had quite a few nice people take the time. it was like their TV set suddenly went on the fritz during a favorite show.
The last issue was related to HTML not playing well with formatting codes from MS Word. I've fixed that in the latest update and added chapter 10.
in the meantime, I ALSO completed writing a story about a wife and her journey of submission. The general premise was that a husband and wife are giving each other midnight confessions in bed. The wife admits she would like to do humiliating and naughty dares.
The husband responds "Really? If we do this, you have to do whatever I say!"
"Wow! okay" the wife responds and off they go. Naturally, as I wrote the actual story though I found myself adding the complications of fantasies getting in the way of real life with jobs, kids, bills, groceries and the fun that also entails of being able to push some of that aside.
it's a fun 10 chapter story that I'll post up after Cunt Next Door.
In the meantime, I am left with some choices of side projects. One thought I had was to try to write a 'short story'.
I use quotes because the last time I tried to do that I ended up writing TWO stories about the family, and 50+ chapters in "Keeping the Entire Family In Line" because I liked the characters so much.
I was thinking that I may just take an unusual picture and start writing a vignette of sorts around what I think the context was of the picture.
That or maybe a "Day in the life" story. It begins with the main character waking up and ends with them falling asleep on a typical day. It doesn't have the "Act 1/Act 2/Act 3" format of a typical story where something surprising happens that leads the character on a journey.
It may just be a British mum and her nudist family off for Holiday in Cornwall, and be about packing sandwiches and how they sunned their buns on the Southern shores of Saint Ives. No blackmail, no life altering events, no mind control, no plot other than a fun day with the family.
It could just as easily be a big titted woman and her two big titted daughters in the trailer park, and how they spend their day, walking up to the store, looking out their patio, drinking a few beers, masturbating, etc.
Many short stories seem to be able to just tell the story of a pretty typical day and let you be a fly on the wall/see out of the main character's eyes. I've never been able to write one successfully. I was thinking perhaps it would be a good exercise for me.
Is that something you would like?
I also have plans to finish a few loose ends (NIS Summer Camp, Visiting Aunt Scarlet) and possibly re-explore Gladiator Brothel.
A few weeks ago I asked if people would be interested in a story about a woman that gets involved in an underground fight club called the "Gladiator Brothel" because wealthy patrons pay to be able to create the conditions of the battle and which women they want to be in it.
I started writing and realized that I suck at action/adventure and writing the gritty and visceral brutality of what combat between two sexy women might be like. It's not just two dudes with tits. There is a whole different vibe to girl fights that I wanted to capture.
I just lacked the skill to really do it. I still want to see the story, not sure if I am the one to write it.
I am open to suggestions/feedback and thoughts.