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Ending a story is like landing a plane

Posted at 11/7/2022, 4:50:06 AM
 

I recently concluded "Cum Dumpster: Mom has an only fans".

There is really only two options to end a story. One is to end on a positive note with a conclusion "They all live happily ever after" and the other is to end on a cliff hanger.

I find the cliff hanger is seldom satisfying.

As an author, You want the characters to grow and develop and show that they learned something. They might be ready for another adventure but it is important to learn when to end a story.

I was once told "Think of the most interesting time in someone's life and write about that time".

I did that for Jerry. I wrote about how his relationship with his mom evolved and blossomed. I was criticized at first because many found him to be cruel to his mom.

That was intentional. I wrote it so that Jerry would feel guilty and so I could write how the mom felt she was the cruel one. She was enjoying this new relationship so much that she felt she was abandoning him as his mom to live out a fantasy. Those who stuck with the story long enough to understand that was the central theme of the story I hope walked away with that.

It was a wonderful story to write, and I feel like there could easily be a NEW adventure for Jerry. I would encourage anyone who liked the characters to play with it and write a fan fiction continuation.

I've been working on finishing my short Naked in School story (naked in summer camp). I have also started publishing Mike McGifford's brilliant "Cunt Next Door" story.

Imagine finding out your mother has been living as a sex slave next door for the last six months? you'd want answers. This is another story though that delves into the power exchange of the relationship. Mike writes far better than me, so it's a thrill to be able to wrap it up. There wont be a ton of pictures included with this story. Just a few.

I've got several other stories I've been working on. The gladiator brothel story idea hit some snags. I just don't write convincing fight scenes (IMHO) and I was unhappy with the direction of the story. Hopefully I will write something that sparks and inspires interest.

 

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