There was an inconsistency in the story, so I replaced two chapters. As of August and September, 1969, Hank hasn’t yet moved out of his old neighborhood in the West Bronx although his family will be doing that in the fall. Thus I had to make some changes in Chapters 6 and 9 to account for that. The revisions in chapter 6 (“Excursions with Molly”) are fairly extensive, as they give more detail about their time together when she drives him home from a state park in Westchester County. I also changed the wording of a few sentences elsewhere in the story.