Chapter 18 is picking up speed, but I keep getting distracted by kitties, and titties, and kitties with titties. So, Ch 18 is forming nicely, Ch 19 I have in my head, it's the dance.
However I do have a slight dilemma that I'm preparing for, Ch 18 and 19 could be too small to be a full chapter, and if combined could be too large of a chapter. What would be preferred? One large chapter, or 2 smaller ones? let me know.
I have also CH 20 in my mind as well. It's going to be the personal reflections of the newer characters, and kind of a introduction to them.
Please, feedback is important. Let me know what the masses would like from my story. Critical feedback and info. Not just "Paula x Jake fuk plz k thx bye!" actual critical thinking on this. I know it's a lot to ask in the day and age for critical feedback.