Well I'm sorry to say I haven't made much progress with Chapter 18. I seem to have lost my editor that I had contact with so I need to edit my story my self again. Right now I'm trying to balance how much detail is too much and what is needed and what is not.
Chapter 18 is all the talk and prep-work for the girls (and boys) for the Dance. Chapter 19 will be the dance, and Chapter 20, I think I will do profiles on the new warriors that were introduced in Ch 15-16. Get their background, how they feel about it all, and some current world events that are going on especially the forced recruitment act.
So rambling on some more. I still have the battle to balance detail. How much is too much? is it enough? is it too much? is it just right? but for now, stuck on preparing for the dance.
Advice, words of wisdom, encouragement, something would help.