Just submitted the first chapter of the bonus chapters Magical Fallout - The Great War. I hope that you'll enjoy the chapter, I have at least three other bonus chapters for this story. The first is to finish this vault story off, which will only be one more chapter or I hope. The second chapter will be about the red mist that I talked about in one of the chapters. Unlike Vault 66, the red mist will be part of the story, so I want to show the effects of this mist, whilst I’m saying that there’ll be only one chapter to this, there might be two. If you have any ideas on the effects, please let me know. The third chapter I have planned is for a moon base, as I have plans for space chapter in my Fallout 3 story once I get to it, and I want to set things up now, Like my mist chapter idea, whilst I’m saying that there’ll be only one chapter to this, there might be two. And if you have ideas for what could happen on the moon base, please let me know.
Now, I would like to apologise for the end of this chapter, yes it looks and feels rushed, I admit that. But, this was one of those chapters where I couldn’t think of a decent ending and so had to end this chapter like this. For that I’m sorry.
I would like to point out, that if you haven't noticed yet, I have started the sequel to this, called, The New World. I hope you take the time and read it and let me know what you think of this story.
Now, before I finish up, I would like to ask a favour from you all, I have ProWritingAid to help me with spelling and grammar, whilst it doesn’t catch everything, I believe it does help with some of the problems that I have. But here’s the thing, I have only got a free version of this app and so limited to certain corrections. So, I’m asking if you could go to ko-fi. com/ darkdragen and buy me a few cups of coffee so that I can upgrade ProWritingAid to make my writing better. It might not be by much, but I’m hoping that it’ll be better than how my work is now.