Okay, gone through, re read the chapter andddd realized where I might have put offensive writing. You know what, I'm not a cunt, so I deleted the section and reverted it to pre rant about society today and made it less offensive. I want my stories to be read by everyone and do not want to exclude people! If you spot anything else that is wrong/offensive/spelled wrong, however you view it, shoot me an email. I have no problem being challenged on these things!