Just submitted another chapter of Magical Fallout - The New World. I hope that you'll enjoy this chapter when it is up. I have about two, maybe three, more chapters of this story to go. I’m using a script that I found on the net for The Postman. I have it all and need to edit it, to add what happens between the talking. And I’ve also had to remove certain parts that haven’t got the Postman or Abby in it. From what I can tell, depending how much I add to the story, I should finish this part of the story in two to three chapters if I’m lucky. But knowing my work, it can have a few more chapters than I planned.
Now, I don’t know how long the Postman and Abby were in the mountains in the movie, but I kept them in the snowy mountains for a few months to make it more believable that Ford was able to set up his own postal route and being able to gain so many people to become Carriers. I can’t see Ford setting up his postoffice and gaining so many people in a month, he would need more time.
I would like to ask, are there any movies/cartoons/anime that I could use to tell the story of Richard Moreau/Richard Grey/The Master and Harold? I ask as I want help to write the story faster so that I can get to the story of the Vault Dweller sooner, that and I got something to work with.
I’m still looking for someone to help with editing this story and the last one, so, if you’re interested in helping me, please let me know. One thing that I need help with is with passive verbs and active verbs, as I’m using ProWritingAid and it tells me I have problems with that. The thing is, I have no idea what passive verbs and active verbs are, and so, I need help with that to make the corrections needed. There are other things that it says I have problems with, but I need to pay to upgrade it before I can see what these problems are. But seeing how I don’t have much money at the moment, so I can’t pay for the upgrade and see what the problem is.