I've finished several stories and they are in the editing process (including Cum Dumpster). There are still quite a few chapters left to post.
I am working on a new story set in England. I've already written one that I researched heavily. "My Son's Dared Me".
I discovered that the British don't really eat lunch, and that their hot dogs come in packs of 10 instead of 8. It's cool details like that which makes a story set somewhere else fun.
I had the PERFECT proofreader for a time. He was a real gent. He had participated in nude bicycle rides in Britain, and I think I'll dedicate this story to him - without naming him to protect his privacy. I'll write an homage in the story to him in my own special way.
He told me not that long ago that the toxic people on this site had made it unfun and he was leaving. I really hated that, because I've felt that negativity as well.
I recently watched Lord of the Rings: Rings to Power and noticed how poorly the actors seem to perform the Irish accents for the Hobbits. One person called it "Famine Cosplay" - they play Irish stereotypes. It's fairly obvious that the writers and directors have no idea what Irish people really sound like.
I don't either. My influences are Benny Hill, The British Office, Doctor Who, Doctor at Large, Steptoe and Son, Monty Python and that British show "Dating Naked".
Many of my characters are what some would call Northie slags. "Oooh, Ahhhh, I got me titty caught in me knickers again, see if ya can pull it right out for me..."
"Mum, it's right disgusting when ye tuck your knee-shooters in your pants"
"Just give them a proper tug, you cheeky monkey!"
Sort of bawdy and vulgar - like a tavern slut that loves showing off her tits and laughs a lot. I love that kind of scenario but these are Southies from Kent and they are going to probably be much lighter on British slang.
What I am looking for is someone who is into my stories (and the themes, which includes bondage and humiliation). This one is going to be heavy on sex and fetish. Ideally, they are British or have lived over there and patient enough to read rough drafts and give feedback.
I am not asking you to check every little punctuation, although grammar help is useful too. I wouldn't turn that down (EVER).
What I just need is a patient person, who wants to help me produce the best story possible, that is an expert in British culture to fact check me and ensure the story would not insult British people.
Ideally, we'd use the email system provided by SOL, I'd send you an advanced draft, and you send me back the lines you'd replace.
Example:
"Are you stupid?"
Suggest
"Are you daft?"
Thank you in advance. If you are curious about the story:
I call it Glutton for Punishment.
Sophie Walsh is on holiday with her family. She gets off on punishment so much that she kept acting out to get it. She was going to a neighbor's who tied her up and disciplined her.
When the family discovered, rather than be upset they accepted her. they found loving discipline helped Sophie in many ways, and she became a model student. The Mum was never a dominant and has always been a bit of a free thinker and she came to submit shortly after, for very different reasons - she simply likes to submit/is a natural submissive but she didn't realize it.
My inspiration for her is this article:
https://www.dailystar.co.uk/love-sex/mum-gets-ruler-tattooed-arm-26125479
and this article:
There is another British Mum, that I remember seeing, I think her name was Dawn and her daughter was Sophie. They lived in the north and the article was "Britain's Worst Mum" and it was simply that Dawn encouraged her daughter to be a "chav" and dress slutty instead of slut shaming her. I can't remember their names exactly, but she was from the north. As I recall, Dawn had a boyfriend who liked to wear pantyhose. (if you know who this is/have the article, be a saint and send it to me please).
The entire holiday in Brighton was paid for by her income as a full time sex worker.