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New chapter Brock Acts of Passion and Violence is up

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I recently posted chapter 2 of Acts of Passion. In this chapter the underwear welcome party for the Sinclairs kicks into higher gear with some games and some sex, still it's mostly sexy set up for later chapters.

I also introduce to my protagonist Zack a new character a girl from outside his circle. The long term point being to show contrasts between his sex date free for all world, with what is 'normal' outside his smallish bubble and what he is missing as he grows up.

Also I start to dig deeper into the dark side of the private military company Pegasus Group, that Brock is Chief Operating Officer (COO) of. Mainly because I want to add an action element to the story. A little bit more interesting than sex scenes with the same old people.

I try to be true to the details and emotions in this 2029 world. I’m a history buff so I do throw in nuggets of real world history. I also spend time looking at aspects of what the world might be like a few years from now when it comes to the Great Game and such. My editor also does a good job of keeping me true.

No idea when chapter 3 will drop. I am writing them as I go and have time. Often writing myself down a path then starting the drafting process over. Voting, I turn that on near the end. No one should vote on a story they have not read most of.

Thanks for reading, feedback always appreciated.

 

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