28 chapters, a lot of work.
I am hoping it was a fun read, especially for fans of mind control stories. I hope the ending will be satisfying and that I possibly see other stories of this same type in the future.
I'd certainly encourage anyone to fan fiction the hell out of these characters with their own story set a after this one concludes (or even during if that's your jam). You have my total permission to do that with literally any of my stories.
I've tried to keep the pace up to post a chapter every day - is that good or bad for most people?
Is it sort of a "Too fast!" or a binge read?