I wanted to get some input from both new and returning readers.
How does everyone feel about adding a element of conflict to the story that wasn't there the first time around? I don't meen some epic save the world, good vs evil type conflict, but something smaller yet significant enough to build character and progress the story.
Add conflict or just keep it sex driven?
It's you im writing/reworking this for, so I value all your feedback and input.
Max