I hadn't realized that the 'comment' button was turned off, I know I didn't do it! I've just read through the 19 responses I got and, while some of it was negative (and I do appreciate that. Writers love to hear what they didn't do or how to improve what they did do) a lot was positive. I guess it ran about 50/50. I do have a definite end to the latest story, but it's not ready just yet. Please, hang in there with me, for those of you who have read it. I appreciate the time you took to read it and to leave the feedback, if you feel it's necessary. Love to read all those comments.