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I started a new story back in September 2022 and then got hung up with how I wanted this to progress. After sitting around for almost a year, I finally got inspired again and finished this one. I usually write my tales in chapters but this is a stand-alone tale and I do hope you enjoy it. Looking forward to feedback, too.
I'm an avid reader of erotica and am a writer part-time myself. What I find quite irritating, other than anal sex, is that writers aren't aware of minor mistakes they make. When quoting someone's thoughts I see that almost 100% of the writers always say, "she/he thought to her/himself." That's quite unnecessary. If someone is "thinking to themselves" then it should just read "He/she thought." There is no need to add the 'to her/himself'. Just a thought. Also, I want to express my thanks to all of those who did post to my 'rant' about anal sex. I love criticism of any type and, in fact, I think it makes the writer much better when he/she does write. Again, thanks to all.
... I simply can't understand what the sudden interest is in sticking someones cock up someone else's ass! It's unnatural and basically some of the dirtiest sex around. I read where someone has their ass fucked and then sucks the cock that was just in there! Gross! I love reading stories here, as well as on other story sites, but if I'm reading a story and there's someone sticking their cock up an ass (Whether it's male or female) then I stop reading and will go no further. It seem that the 'most popular' usage of fucking an ass is by black men fucking white women. The same goes for when someone is calling another person 'master'. I simply refuse to indulge in such things. No matter how great the stories are, if either happens I immediately stop reading and will not read another story by anyone who uses such techniques. And that's my two cents worth for the day.
... the final chapter will be submitted for approval later. This final piece was hard for me, as it reminded me in so many ways of how my life's gone recently. This is the way I originally planned to end it and I do hope you're satisfied with it, as I know I am. Hopefully now, on to another tale. Hope you enjoy it and again, I look forward to comments. Thanks so much for the warm welcome to my return and I do hope to be back soon with another tale.
Only one more chapter to know. I've already 'written' this one in my head and have also made several revisions before getting it in print. I do hope you'll enjoy it. Again, thanks for reading... and for voting. I appreciate it. Damn, it feels good to be writing again.
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