I decided to try something different. There were a couple of scenes that did not make it into Zack and Heidi Playtime. I cleaned them up and had my editor Steve take a couple of passes. Just add on to Chp 6 & 7. Note there is no voting on commenting enable and the tagging is minimal. Enjoy. It can be found under the series tab.
A couple of people have asked if the series will continue. Yes. But after a break for travel as I have to refresh my ideas.
Brothel Night. Over the weekend I did some edits on the entire story, mostly in Chp 5. Just cleaning up a few things and continuality issues I missed or that came up as I wrote more stories. If you have not read it, I hope you will as it is a key piece of in the series.
Thanks for reading. Next story probably in the May time frame.