Hi All
Some additional comments by you readers caused me to fix a few points in chapters 10 & 11. These things made the story factually correct.
The fact that readers feel free to let me know how to make the stories better without the "You Suck!" part is wonderful.
Thank you all for reading and thank you for comments.
I also wanted to thank a reader, Murphygirl1, for her readership. Way, way back in the dark ages of January 1, 2017 when I posted the first chapter of my first story "Mick and Keri", Murphygirl1 was my first commenter. Her notes, while short and to the point, have been a constant of positive support.
Thank you Murphygirl1.
And thank you readers. Moving forward I hope to mess up less and write more better (that was for my dear grammar friends)
Mick