Hi All
Chapter 9's rewrite posted today and this begins the real changes in the story that were caused by an awful lot of negative comments. These chapters should square away the story line and lead on to the end.
The next new chapter will post on Sunday Feb 6 and then on every Sunday morning to the end of the story.
Thanks to all of you for reading and for all of you for the comments, yes even the "You suck!" ones.
I hope the stories have had enough of an effect on you that you'll vote for my stories in the Clitorides. Yes that was blatant vote pandering.
Mick