Hi All
Well chapters 6 & 7 of "On Guard" are up and chapter 8 posts Sunday morning. I ope the changes in direction have been noticed because it was after chapters 9, 10 and 11 that I started getting the really negative comments.
In order to change those issues I had to go back and rewrite or redirect the story. So the real changes should start to be seen in a few days.
As a sidebar, I see that I've been nominated for a few Clitorides. Maybe this year I'll finish higher than 2nd to DFL! "The Fortune of the O'Dells" is nominated for the Best Erotic Western. "The Passion of the O'Dells" is nominated for Best Long Erotic Story" and for "Best Romantic Story".
Thank you in advance for your votes and remember to support my good friend Michael Loucks for the several stories and the individual "Author of the Year". I think he should get Author of the Year just for the shear volume of quality writing.
"Have a great Saturday night and Sunday morning and Go Chiefs!
Mick