So, a quick post to answer a few questions and to ask a favour.
First, many of you have been asking if I have the original story and if they can have a copy. Of course I have a copy. i'm not writing it from scratch and trusting my memory. Some parts are cleaned up, others removed or replaced. Some chapters are entirely new, while some have been removed.
The further I edit and post, the more I'm sure a re-write as im doing is the way to go. The original is a mess. The spelling and grammar, or a lack of, is enough to make you cry. I'm surprised anyone made it past the first chapter. Chapter one alone had over 500 errors detected by my editing software.
So I won't be sharing the original. I want this new version to be a story I can proudly associate my name with.
Secondly, calling all original readers!
I would like to hear from you. I want to know what you remember of the original, what you think of the new version, and if you noticed any new sections. But, more importantly, I want to know, from what you remember, what you liked and disliked about the original. Favorite and least favorite characters, scenes you like or found boring or of no purpose. Kinks you want to see more or less of, or new ones added. The more you tell me, the better.
That's all for now. Remember updates every Friday and I am a complete whore for feedback via DM or comments, so keep them coming.
Max