New Story starts posting tomorrow and over the next four days. Four chapters and an epilog. Family Sex Date staring Zack and Danika and an expanded cast of family. To be honest this was a hard story to find a starting point and how to tell a story with some complex moral issues, at least from Zacks point of view. I almost gave up. This story does tackle another family’s incestuous practices, in 2029, from Zacks point of view as a guest. Much of the story is Zack and Rebekah talking and storytelling. That turned out to be the best way to tell the story. The way I write is also a journey itself just starting and seeing what happens and that is true with this story too.
When I write I value good characters, storyline then the sex, in that order. This is story with sex driven by the main characters and some plot. Not a spank story. It is just a few years from now the world is a little different, more conservative politically but also more socially liberal. My goal is to make the reader think about the subject while enjoying the story as it progresses. I do move the characters along the timeline. In the epilog we catch up with Hannah, Zacks dad Brock along with Ms Franks. There is also a time jump of a few years at the very end so please if you enjoy the characters be sure to see where our hero’s meet up a few years down the road.
Thanks to my editor Steve who came alongside my writing a couple of stories ago. Always makes the story better. I encourage any writers reading this who do not have an editor or proof reader to seek one out on SOL.
Of course, feedback and suggestions are always appreciated.
Pete