I learned about another few typos of the who-whom variety. Fixed. Thanks.
Interesting comment on the story. Most have been pretty positive but every once in a while you get one that makes you scratch your head. “I usually like your stories but "Martian Justice" is just too trite!” Not sure I would ever have considered it trite. According to Merriam-Webster: “hackneyed or boring from much use : not fresh or original” Oh well, another fan lost.
As a Christmas present, I am posting two chapters today. Enjoy!