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I have been struggling with the help of a few freinds/long time readers to act as an editor.

I do not correspond outside of SOL With my personal email, which makes it difficult because I rely upon the internal email system.

However, you will see few updates from me, and the ones that do happen will unfortunately have reduced quality.

Editors are more than grammar check on steroids. They are the ones who help keep the story consistent and guide me when I start down a strange path.

I have *FOUR* stories in process. Here are the statuses:

Puppy Student Program - NIS - I wanted to do an alternative discipline naked in school story about puppy-play. I was inspired by something someone wrote about "Best of intentions" from school administrators in the forums.

Essentially, the idea behind it (without telling the students) would not only be body/kink positivity but also the experience would make students more inclined to follow instructions/be man's best friend if they could adopt the attitude of a dog for just a week.

STATUS:
I posted chapter six, with some bad edits/errors that I've tried to fix with a recent update that should be posted shortly.

I have 14 chapters with the story almost concluded. After Katie and Ashley's first week, I went down a very different path with them. I am thinking of just cutting that out entirely.

Resetting my Bitch Button:
I came back strong with this one, and have 10 chapters in edit. Jessie's arc as he leaves the nudist resort much more confident, and then subsequently his cousin's experimentation with submission have added a whole "third act" to the story. I was planning to take them to disney world and then to live with Mike for a while.

Unfortunately, no editor - so chapters are slow to post. There are at least 5 more chapters to this story before I think it concludes although a sequel focused strictly on Buttercup might be fun.

Christmas Cums Butt Once Per Year:
This story is complete and has 15 chapters. The exception is the most recent chapter. I am still futzing with it, because I am not sure it is plausible or fits and while I like it - I also think it could be better.

No editor means I can't get this one posted that much but the VERY satisfying conclusion awaits.

Keeping the Entire Family in Line:
This and the prequel (keeping the men in the family in line) has been put on hold. I really enjoyed the family essentially building their own contract of how things would be - but I lost inspiration somewhere along the way and this will be on hiatus for a bit.

I'd love for a guest author to also write a little fan fiction about some of these characters or collaborate on some with me. It could be interesting to see the story from other character's perspectives or embellish a little on some of what happens during and after.

What is new for 2022:

A long time friend and collaborator of mine has recently said he may not be participating on the site much any more which is a real bummer. He had all these awesome vignettes that he wrote that I'd like to do justice with.

Visiting Aunt Scarlet is a published an example of one of his stories that went about five chapter strong and then he lost interest and so I stopped making updates to it. I'd like to finish that one.

We had another one about a woman who answers a personal ad for BDSM relationship only to find out it is her dad (and mom). What do they do now?

We had another one about called "Big Montana Tits" (a play on Big Montana Sky) about a boy who travels to a Montana ranch with his family. The ranch owner's idea of discipline is not quite as extreme as most of my stories - girls get to wear clothes (most of the time) for instance. I wanted to explore a kinky but not extreme lifestyle.

Lastly, I've had this idea about retelling a George's Pichard classic story "Marie Gabrielle". It's a graphic novel you can probably find if you google it. I think I would focus on the first part.

In it, this woman is a widow and she lives with her husband's affluent mother. At some point, she is bored and stays home from church to suck her brother in law's cock in the water closet. She is caught, disgraced and in her fall from grace accepts that she has a choice: Either life as a servant at the house, or public humiliation and marched through the streets to a house for disgraced women.

She chooses to remain there, with her son and daughter, and this would be the story from one of their perspectives I think.

 

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