Dear Readers, thank you for reading Brothel Night over the course of the 7 chapters the score went up, down and up again as the ‘night progressed'. That story was my longest effort to date. As I wrote before when I started, I had no idea how it would end and who the main characters would meet along the way. I'll admit to being a bit tired when I finished but it was fun to explore and create some new characters.
Just a note about the young people in the story. The events capture a moment in time for a few hours. You should assume they have all same emotions that teens today face from body image to self esteem to the constant battle of hormones. You can bet among that room of girls they were not all friends. There were also different reasons for attending and goals. Some of which I tried to shed light on in the fictional world a few years hence.
I do try and keep my stories as grounded in reality as possible. If I get a little wordy it is because I think these pages are great place to explore the ‘what if’ along with moral and ethical questions. I have stayed away from stating what I think the political landscape will look like in 2029 but I believe it will be more conservative in governance but continue to be more liberal socially.
Looking ahead there is a new shorter 3 chapter story that will post in the next week. Expect to see it start to drop Monday. Zack goes on a date with… It’s a fun to the point story that also moves the story along the timeline. The last to drop on Friday will be an epilog that updates a few other things that have happened as the school year ends.
I do appreciate feedback from readers.