Chapter 5 of Brothel Night has posted. After the final chapter there will be a epilog wrapping up some loose ends. Still have to write it.
First positive and constructive feedback is appreciated. I got a couple of positive messages and a bunch of new followers. If you enjoyed the story and/or would like to hear more on a character story line feel free to message me. It helps.
When I decided to write this story about a high school brothel, I had no idea how to do so. It took months of false starts. Usually on where to begin. When I started I just knew it would have 4 main characters, Zack, his dad Brock, Lisa/Mrs Strong and of course Hannah. Once I started, I just let the story go where it went. I found characters and story lines along the way. I had never tried to write a story with this many characters and visual cues to describe. Thankfully after Chapter 1, Steven volunteer to edit and really made the story smoother and better, seeing the works promise.
For me and like many mainline authors I read, I just set out on a journey of discovery not knowing where it was going. So if at points it feels like I am finding my way, I was. I decided to add a mysterious backstory. The original author of the Sex Date series posted his stories under an incest tag and I continued the tradition, adding incest spice. The bi scene with Zack, Bethany and VP Burns that was a surprise to me too, it just felt right in 2029 there would be a more open environment though not an interest in mine to write more than what I did. Same with Danika's incest scene is just happened.
So there are a lot of new characters, hence the character list. Any future story will focus less on Hannah and move into Zacks very complicated world.
Again thanks for reading and positive creative feedback helpful as the scoring system can be all over the place in judging if the story is being enjoyed. In the end I write for myself telling a story I want to read and have bouncing around in my head. Heck who would not want to go to this high school if you could.