Years ago I submitted a long story about people in love, and it was received well.
I went back to the story and after researching what I could do to improve it, I re-wrote and re-formatted it, and finally got two editors to look at it.
I believe that it is better now, easily more readable and with a bit less of my German background.
I hope you enjoy reading the new version - I enjoyed revising it.
Have fun!