The stories that I post on this site are my mostly unedited first drafts. I'm sorry the story is confusing. I am still learning some of the finer points of writing. Sometimes I'm in such a hurry to get new ideas down, that I miss some of the basics. I will repost the entire story when I'm finished writing it, and the final edit is complete. To everyone who has commented, I would like to say thank you. Not just for the praise, but also the criticism. I am learning a lot from them, so don't be shy about correcting me. I will try to keep this draft as clear as I can before it is properly edited. So, if there's something that you need to be cleared up, let me know and I will fix it. Thank you, again to everyone reading my story.