I enjoy reading Indian Erotica.
Usually, it seems to be about powerful matronly women, submissive sisters, and is told by a very horny (often naive) young man.
At least - this is the kind I like to read.
I tried to write an homage to those stories in the form of "Nehal". It wasn't a very popular story. It is only three chapters. I researched regional dialects, food, etc. However, I could never be certain I got it right.
I asked (at the time) for someone from India to give it a read and let me know what they thought. I never received any feedback one way or the other.
I decided to spruce up the story this weekend. I added a little more content, checked the grammar, and added one story picture.
If you are a fan of India Erotica/My stories and you want something short and sweet - here it is;
https://storiesonline.net/s/23207/nehal