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Chapter 9

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Had a couple of typos in 7 and 8, so I reloaded them. Thanks for pointing them out. Fixed. Also learned a bit more about coins. For those curious, coins would have been common in Scandinavia, even if they were simply stolen from England and Scotland. They would almost certainly not have dates on them. They generally would have been stamped with the profile of a king and his name in Latin. You would probably need a specialist to date things that way. Enough said.

I got some good feedback from my British editors in this chapter. It seems that Yanks and Brits really do speak different languages. When I used the words sheetrock and lumber, I was informed that the British used plasterboard and timber. I had to change some wording in the story. There were a few other incidents like that in the story. Interesting!

Chapter 9 is halfway through the story, so I am turning on voting. Hope everybody likes it. Vanity, thy name is author.

 

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