Hey there everyone. I started writing this story and got excited with how fast I was pounding out the chapters, if you'll pardon the pun. In that rush of cranking them out (I was actually up to chapter 10) I started to push out the story faster than I should have which I didn't like. Things felt rushed, forced and downright out of place. My characters didn't develop enough and I need to nuke the thing and start again. Stick with me, it should be better than before, but hopefully be more of a story than an outline with lipstick on it.
I do not have an editor, despite trying to please keep sending me the mistakes you find. It is greatly appreciated and I do listen and revise based on input. Work is insane right now but I hope to get into at least a chapter a week of quality posting.
Thank you all for the encouraging words. The dramatic drop in score clued me in and you were all correct, my writing was not the quality it could have been. Thank you all for sticking with me!