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Bigger than I thought

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That's what she said, ha! Anywho, I like to stay a several (3-5) chapters ahead of what I release on this site. It gives me room to look back and edit things that don't work for the advancing story. I work without an editor, as you probably know from reading my work, so it also lets me take a step back and fix obvious errors. I'm trying to get on a once a week release schedule, but let's just say chapter 15 is a doozy. It's probably the longest, most graphic I've written yet and I've still got to close it out.
For those waiting patiently (slow is in the tags) thank you for riding this rollercoaster. For those who are new, it's probably about to start getting "good"

Also for those sending me mail with corrections or telling me how much you like the story, THANK YOU! I love each and every message I get :)

And we're back

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Hey everyone, sorry for the long delay. The first 7 chapters are rewritten and published now so the story should make sense again. My life has been crazy, but I want to say I appreciate those readers who reached out to tell me they enjoyed the story thus far. It means a lot and I hope you enjoy what is coming up! Please feel free to reach out, I read every single letter and this is probably the nicest community on the internet. If you catch an error, please let me know and I'll try to get it in the next update.

Thank you!!!

When Opportunity Knocks Mulligan

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Hey there everyone. I started writing this story and got excited with how fast I was pounding out the chapters, if you'll pardon the pun. In that rush of cranking them out (I was actually up to chapter 10) I started to push out the story faster than I should have which I didn't like. Things felt rushed, forced and downright out of place. My characters didn't develop enough and I need to nuke the thing and start again. Stick with me, it should be better than before, but hopefully be more of a story than an outline with lipstick on it.
I do not have an editor, despite trying to please keep sending me the mistakes you find. It is greatly appreciated and I do listen and revise based on input. Work is insane right now but I hope to get into at least a chapter a week of quality posting.
Thank you all for the encouraging words. The dramatic drop in score clued me in and you were all correct, my writing was not the quality it could have been. Thank you all for sticking with me!

Patience please, my toes just got wet

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I am back on my journey to become an author after putting it aside for a decade or more. First chapter is posted and I'm still looking for an editor. Please be patient as, just like anything, being out of practice takes time to correct.

I think that I will use this as an opportunity to explore my own interests. I used to be in a BDSM relationship, which was a nice healthy outlet to talk about kinks and taboo. If you are offended by what I write, you may be surprised to learn that I may also be offended by what I write. I now have a taste for things I used to abhor without giving a chance, in fantasy land for 90% percent.

So give the stories a chance to progress before judging them too harshly. I have an ironed out storyline before I start so they're going somewhere I promise. If offering criticism I request that you explain why something sucks, and how you feel it could be better.

If you'd like to just talk kinks, or kick around story ideas I welcome your messages. The world doesn't progress by shying away from new topics. I look forward to entertaining and learning from everyone!

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