Hi All
There was really constructive comments about "Affair of Choice". They pointed out some weaknesses (none said anything about the many and assorted spelling errors). I decided to go back a read it again and found all the spelling errors and fixed them and then I added another thousand or so words.
The story moves better, fills in the holes that were pointed out and doesn't seem to end in a rush. Please take a few minutes and read it again and see if it deserves a better score.
Also, see if I added more errors! You can always comment on those.
Mick