Hi All
One of the comments made to me about Chapter 12 pointed out an error regarding the use of Jeeps in WW1. I fixed that.
Then there was the issue of Patty and her letters to Paul and her four years at college. Another spot on comment by the same reader made me go back and read the whole book. He was correct and I've made changes to Chapter 12 to reflect the comments and make the story make more logical sense.
I also made a change to the situation with Opal Anne and her getting married that is addressed in later chapters. Now that part of the story flows and makes sense!
Thanks again for your readership and your comments. They can and do make a difference.
Mick