I've posted chapter one, Rite of Passage. It's a rip of Window of Opportunity and James is my Mary Sue character, because why the fuck not.
It's a Predator Stargate Crossover, the first chapter introduces the players.
I plan on having five, maybe six chapters in total. A small, one-shot story with little to no sex and just action, action, action in it.
The military stuff is done by a lovely chap called David, who pinged me on Tempus when I asked for advice. He will be, when he gets the time, be helping me with future chapters.
Steven & NNPDAD have edited as always. I must say I'm quite proud of this chapter.
Jaffa Kree!