Hi All
So here I go and rework "A Plan Comes Together" and I proudly post the edited and corrected version and then I get an email from a reader known as Red Dog, telling me that I screwed something up!
And he was right!
No matter how carefully I read things through. No matter how good an editor is. Something always slips through.
Red Dog, thank you for reading and for the really good catch. It makes the story make better sense.
I've posted the corrected and re-edited corrected and edited version, but looking at the time, it might not get posted until Friday morning.
I love my readers!
Mick