I had to do an edit on chapter 8. As one of my readers noted, "You wrote 'He removed the bullets from the gun' No ex-military person would use 'bullets'; they are cartridges and there is a significant difference. Same for when he threw them out of the car window." Quite correct. Fixed. As my readers have learned over the years, accuracy is important.
I am turning on voting now. Hopefully, people enjoy this and show it.
This is also the end of Book One, but don't worry. There won't be a break in the schedule for uploading. The next upload will occur on Friday.
Enjoy!