I'm so impressed with this story... I never thought I'd even get this far truth be told. Steven and NN have been rocks throughout and without their help it wouldn't even be half of what it is! I know the biggest issue I had with it, is no outline. So book two I promise will have one, a beginning, middle and end. I am so pleased with the result.
Chapter one has surpassed 20 thousand hits oO at 21525 hits, making the story over 30 thousand hits in total.
I'm in negotiation phase with someone to write James' Military career out while I work on his college stage.
How does everyone feel if book two has sex? It feels more approriate to the setting as that's what one does in college! Obviously, I will try and make sure it doesn't overshadow the plot of course.