So seven has posted, lots and lots of lovely comments, and a few errors I need to correct. Steven and NNPDAD are incredible as always and any errors left over are mine not theirs! I'm stunned at how positive the result is.
It's possible that chapter one may very well be rolling over the 20 thousand mark by the end of the year, which is mind blowing. My biggest story to date. Screw the score, just keep reading with me.
Obviously the biggest issue I have is posting and an outline, Steven and I have had long talks on the latter. The real reason I didn't have an outline for part one, is primarily because I never thought I'd get this far with the story. I only ever posted the original two chapters to get them off my computer and as a way to wash my hands of them. But damn if that didn't blow up in my face.
We're working on chapter eight, the outline is almost completed and tonight I've got some serious writing to do.
As always my compliments to my two brilliant editors, who without their tireless effort, this would be a big stinking pile of dog shit that I'm trying to scrape off my shoes, now it's a diamond in the rough.
Thank you for sticking with me, you lot, who read, comment both good *and* negative, are what makes it worthwhile.