I'm reposting the 2nd chapter because it's sloppy.
I hate that.
I was trying to play cribbage with my Grandma while I edited a porn story. I lost every game, my story looks like crap, and I'm probably going to hell.
All in all, not a bad days work.
My original story is evolving, if I can get serious for a minute. I'm starting to like my characters, which is always bad. It might be more romantic and less ruthless than I previously planned. No, I take that back, it'll still be Ruthless, just because I hate that name, but I probably won't let Barb rape anyone. Now I want her to be nice, for gawshakes, as Grandma would say.
I apologize in advance if anyone's life depended on the NC code, it might have to be coercion instead. We'll see, so don't die yet. Okay? I love you!