FIRST THINGS FIRST:
THANK YOU for 12 000 downloads. I never thought this story would have even been downloaded once. This I appreciate, together with your feedback in either Comments or e-mail. AND the Votes! Maybe I should stand for President or something - need a country though!
AS I do not wish to confuse some of the valued readers: I will start using real place names in the story. I did want to just keep it a story happening somewhere. This type of crime is happening EVERYWHERE. In every country. So, as to not confuse: I will be using REAL place names in the future.
As the story now enters a very sensitive stage, the research is much more involving. To keep the story flow I need to balance all the variables in the way of keeping it simple. At least until...
Okay, you know and expect it. Saying no more.
I also found that some of the Readers are very familiar with my native language. To you I say: "Die son skyn. Dis warm. Kom ons braai! Bring die dop en dam! ...en dans op Snotkop se beat."
Have a safe day. (I believe there's a bug or something about.)
Bye 4 Now!!