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As I planned out the events of Too Much Love going forward, I realized I had an opportunity to do one long follow-on section with Nick that would take up all of Chapter 76.

Then, I reorganized the order of things and realized I would be ending Chapter 75 with a scene also from Nick's perspective. I don't think I've ended a chapter with one perspective and stayed on that perspective anywhere in TML. Also, chapter 75 was going to be long, so I tacked Nick's scene onto the beginning of his follow-on in chapter 76.

Sixty-two pages into that follow-on, I have realized that Nick's follow-on is really too long for a single chapter. So, it will actually span across chapters 76 and 77, immediately breaking my "no chapter changes without a perspective shift" rule. Chapter 77 may be all one section like 76 or it might have a relatively short section after that putting a coda on Sunday, September 14, 2015.

Either way, I think this unbroken block is meant to signal that we're going to be seeing a lot more scenes where Nick is either the viewpoint character or the center of the action going forward. We'll see how that works. I still have a ton of non-Nick threads to advance and resolve.

Chapter 75 of Too Much Love and Chapter 1 of Jester's Ransom should be out tomorrow.

 

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