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What's My Age Again? (Again)

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Rereading Too Much Love, I'm now seeing there are a lot of systematic retcon problems with character ages and when things happened in the backstory. I've decided to make some moderately extensive changes as I write. I will eventually post all of the changes in one place. But, for now, here are the changes I'm planning to backfill:

* Pilar was originally twenty-five at the start of the story, but magically became twenty-eight. I now see why that shifted and it was dumb. She's going back to being twenty-five and about to turn twenty-six.

* Threnody and Jesse are now 25 and 22 respectively, not 28 and 21. That math didn't work.

* Tucker is now about to turn 13 so that he can be 18 in 2020. Anne has gone from 29 to 31.

* The current patriarch's name is Obadiah again. It briefly got changed to William in later chapters.

These changes will take a few days to implement. I'll post the full list when they're posted.

 

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