Less that 5 min and my story has 169 dnlds. Has a 6.9 score already. thank you for a nice score. For those of you who have read it already I have corrected some errors, inserted a missing paragraph, and differentiated between human and alien speech. Tavi uses contractions and the alien doesn't.
I may give the creature a name in a future chapter but I haven't decided. I am working on the next story and will post it when it is complete, hopefully I'll remember to edit 'before' I post it.