I have written a story called "Nehal" about a man from a small village in India.
It would be a blessing if someone who is from there could read it and provide feedback. I am posting up the first chapter soon after I finish editing it.
The story takes place in Gujart and I've used some native Gujarti words. I am hoping that I did so in proper context and the story reads like a person who isn't a native English speaker wrote it.
I also hope that it tittilates and amuses. If so I will continue it.