I suspected that this story would get a shitty score and it did. 4.79. This story came to me in a dream and I wrote it down to keep from forgetting it. For it to really be a story it needs more substance. However, I'm not doing it on the Kindle. It was a birch creating the story on it. And even worse trying to upload it. I had to copy and paste. I'll wait till I get my laptop back from HP.